Wednesday, 2 May 2012

Task 5


Writing Process (Example of topic sentences, supporting details, and conclude sentences)

The Topic Sentence
My hometown is famous for several amazing natural features.  First, it is noted for the Wheaton River, which is very wide and beautiful. Also, on the other side of the town is Wheaton Hill, which is unusual because it is very steep.

Supporting Sentences
My hometown is famous for several amazing natural features.  First, it is noted for the Wheaton River, which is very wide and beautiful. Also, on the other side of the town is Wheaton Hill, which is unusual because it is very steep. The third amazing feature is the Big Old Tree. This tree stands two hundred feet tall and is probably about six hundred years old.

Conclude Sentences
My hometown is famous for several amazing natural features.  First, it is noted for the Wheaton River, which is very wide and beautiful. Also, on the other side of the town is Wheaton Hill, which is unusual because it is very steep. The third amazing feature is the Big Old Tree. This tree stands two hundred feet tall and is probably about six hundred years old. These three landmarks are truly amazing and make my hometown a famous place.

Task 10


Task 10
WULAN FOLKLORE (BRUNEI)
There’s was a legend the beautiful princess down from the sky and her name is Wulan. She usually plays and sing at the paddy field, but unfortunately someday she can’t go home to her castle in the sky because had a human or Mak Puteh and Pak Tam took his fly shawl while she sings and plays at the paddy field. Then, Mak Puteh pretends to sympathies and with her kindness Mak Puteh took Wulan to stay with her family. At home, Mak Puteh introduces her husband (Pak Tam) and his son (Jamal), Wulan can stay with Mak Puteh family but with one condition, while Wulan cook the rice nobody can open the cover of rice pot. Then, with pleasure Pak Tam, Mak Puteh and Jamal agreed with the condition. Next, one day, Pak Tam had a bad luck when he bitten by snake while he work in the paddy field, situation of Pak Tam was so serious he can’t take longer and him call his son Jamal to marry with Wulan that’s last hope Pak Tam for Jamal. Then, Jamal agreed and married Wulan and got the girl cute twin babies and theirs name Melati and Cempaka. After that, when Melati and Cempaka plays something, Melati found the fly shawl belongs to Wulan. Then, Melati and Cempaka fighting each other to snatch the Wulan fly shawl. Wulan heard the fighting and called her twins daughter to help her clearing around the house. Wulan ask why they fighting each other, Cempaka told Wulan about the Fly shawl and Wulan took the shawl then the twins not longer fight each other, Wulan wondering why her fly shawl can be at her husband house but Wulan don’t care about it until….. Jamal open the cover the pot rice that’s because he wonder why Wulan never allow opening the pot rice while cooking. Then, Wulan saw Jamal broke he promises and take the fly shawl and going to her castle in the sky. Finally, since that Wulan never come back to visit her family.

Tuesday, 1 May 2012

Task 9 "househusband"


Based on the text given by our lectures is “Househusbands”, in the other words man or husband working in the house, then wife going out for work. That’s occurring in American families. It’s not an easy life; a man has to change many of his ideas and his ways. That’s so much different when working outside and inside home, working outside home usually everything must be hurry and time always important. But at home it’s different; a househusband cannot be hurry all the time that can cause everyone unhappy. Then men must learn to slow down because that is the first and most important rule for a househusband. Other wise, the househusband must be smart to show felling about something, the children need to know if theirs father angry and the father need to tell them or explain carefully, in that the child can understand easily, a househusband have to do that for avoid the families may get the wrong idea. Then, when the househusband didn’t do that there may be had serious problems. Other than that, househusband doing the housework such as cooking, cleaning, shopping and also take cares theirs children. But, it was the easiest things to learn and that the way he acts with the other family. For the conclusions, being a “Househusband” had to change  the way he thinks about time, smart to spent time to make everybody happy.

Task 8 If I were the main character....


Based on the movie I had watched is “The Mist”, its kind of horror movie with the other living things from the other planets or we called it ALIEN. Other than that, the story of the movie its all about a father tried to protect his families and other people, but it’s too late until he trapped in the store with the others.  Other wise, the father on this movie was a courage, and smarter man. But, when he lost hope his started to give up protecting the others and him think its better kill his son with their own hand, than his son died eaten by the ALIENS. Then, if I were the main character or be the father in this movie I will protect my family from everything, nobody or other living thing especially ALIENS can hurts them. Besides, I will think logically and NEVER kill my sons when I lost hope to protect them or give up because it CANT’T be. Everything had solutions when we be more patients and think more logically.  Nothing impossible we can’t do in this world, except something had relation with god such us make a decisions who in the heaven or hell on the future. For the conclusions, I will protect my families until my last blood drop on the earth, I have to do that because theirs my responsibility to take care of it.