Common Mistakes that always I do in Writing

a     Grammar problem

-          Don’t know how to used grammar properly.

-          Always do mistakes for the simple grammar such as past tense and present tense

-          Lack use adjective

-          Can’t arrange the words properly

-          Always forget used connectors.

b     Have a problem to start the essay or summary.

-          Lack of new words for started the essay

-          Have problem to translate Malay language to English

-         Hard to construct the best introduction

c English was not difficult subject. I tried my best to control it, but that can’t be if I lazy to studied the subject.

d     Suggestion to overcome the problem

-          Keep read English newspaper, magazines, novel, article, and so on.

-          Practise talk in English with friends

-          Do practices make an essay, summary and check grammar properly.

water pollution

Topic	Water Pollution
Topic Sentences	Water is one of the basic human needs.
Supporting Details	a)      Factories pour their chemical into river b)      Water pollution from pesticides c)      Polluted by garbage or plastics
Conclusion	No water no life.
Connectors Used	Firstly, after that, other than that, for the conclusion

Paragraph:

Water is one of the basic human needs.  Firstly, water pollution coming from chemical and industrial processes. When factories pour their chemicals and livestock wastes directly into rivers, the water becomes poisonous and oxygen levels are depleted causing many aquatic organisms to die. After that, cause of water pollution is from pesticides. Farm pesticides poison aquatic plants and animals. Animal manure, chemical fertilizers, pollutes water by supplying excess nutrients. It can be effect decreasing the amount of oxygen level in water causing the death of many aquatic organisms. Other than that, water is also being polluted by garbage specifically plastics and other plastic-like substances. Plastics can’t be decayed, when it is eaten by fish or other aquatic animals such as walrus it can be cause their death. For the conclusion, water is a natural resource that we need to preserve for a large contribution in our daily lives, no water no life.

PARAGRAPH WRITING 

a) Paragraph:

I love to eat Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC). That’s my favourite food. Especially “Chicken Rice Combo” It contains two piece of chicken. Such as, wings, drumstick or chicken breast.  Furthermore, it also has a bowl of rice, slices of cucumber, appetizer or chicken ball soup and beverages. After that, the price of it not very expensive. Everybody can buy and eat it. The price is RM10.70 but it not a permanent price. Usually the price follows kind of area. Other than that, Kentucky Fried Chicken is not a healthy food. It contains so much fat and sugar. Such as, fat from the fried chicken and a lot of sugars from the beverages, like Pepsi, Strawberry F&N, Mountain Dew, Revive, 100plus and so on.  But in it we can get vitamin from the fresh slices of cucumber. However, it’s not comparable with contain of fat in it. For the conclusion, Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC) was unforgettable food taste.

Topic	The food that I like
Topic sentences	I love to eat Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC)
Supporting Details	a)    That’s my favourite food. Especially “Chicken Rice Combo” b)    The price of it not very expensive. c)    Kentucky Fried Chicken is not a healthy food.
Conclusion	Kentucky Fried Chicken is unforgettable food taste.
Connectors Used	Furthermore, Moreover, But, After that, Other than that, Usually, However

b) Paragraph:

Exercise can give the best health to our body. Take time for 10 minutes to exercise daily. Before going to work or college take 10 minutes for jogging or some kind of exercise to keep our body fit and fresh. Next, exercise can help prevent excess weight gain or help maintain weight loss. Other than that, get more active throughout the day in simple ways by taking the stairs, its better than taking the elevator, it can burn our fat faster.  After that, exercises promote better sleep. Moreover regular physical activity can help fall asleep faster. Don’t do exercise too close to bed time. It may make our body more tired and late to wake up for tomorrow morning. For the conclusion, daily exercise can give better health and keep fit. 

Topic	Exercise to keep fit
Topic sentence	Exercise can give the best health to our body
Supporting Details	a)    Take time for 10 minutes to exercise daily.  b)    Exercise can help prevent excess weight gain or help maintain weight loss. c)    Exercise promotes better sleep.
Conclusion	Daily exercise can give better health to our body.
Connectors Used	Next, other than that, moreover, for the conclusion

WRITING PROCESS

STEP 1:  PREWRITING                  

·         Decide on a topic to write about.

·         Brainstorm ideas about the subject.

·         List places the information.

·         Do research.

STEP 2:  DRAFTING

·         Put the information with own words.

·         Write sentences and paragraphs even if they are not perfect.

 STEP 3:  REVISING (EDITING)                

·         Rearrange words or sentences.

·         Take out or add parts.

·         Replace overused or unclear words.

STEP 4: FINAL COPY            

·         Be sure all sentences are complete.

·         Correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation.

·         Change words that are not used correctly

·         Recopy it correctly and neatly.